Sunday, May 23, 2010

Mag 15


lying on the shore
of humanity

lured by envy and desire

gasping for the
life-giving source

snared by artifice

wide-eyed with fear

released by mercy

loves passes
through

gliding once again
in the cool waters

of grace

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11 comments:

  1. HelenMay 23, 2010 at 9:43 AM

    I love the spiritual feel of your Magpie!

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  2. Kathe W.May 23, 2010 at 9:59 AM

    Very nice-
    This is what love is sometimes:
    Catch and Release.

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  3. LisaMay 23, 2010 at 1:31 PM

    Yes, it is true. Simply put no profounder words written for Magpie!

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  4. SheriMay 23, 2010 at 2:16 PM

    oh, this is lovely! i'm almost embarrassed that you seem to know me so well...your words gave my secret away, my daily struggle to reach for the One who sets this captive free! such a beautiful magpie and it's written so well...

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  5. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMay 23, 2010 at 10:57 PM

    your words touch common ground of all of us,
    a universal piece,
    talented writing and fun magpie!

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  6. joannaMay 24, 2010 at 12:33 AM

    Ditto to all of the above comments -- a truly beautiful poem,

    Joanny

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  7. Tess KincaidMay 24, 2010 at 5:16 AM

    The cool waters of grace. How beautiful is that?!!

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  8. Brian MillerMay 24, 2010 at 6:55 AM

    smiles. beautiful, and that grace she found me...now i run smooth. nice magpie!

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  9. HelenaMay 24, 2010 at 7:46 AM

    This flowed along with utmost truth.

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  10. Tumblewords:May 24, 2010 at 9:50 AM

    Beautiful!

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  11. SuzMay 24, 2010 at 7:03 PM

    a wonderful thoughtful poem
    grace...say no more

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