It has an eerie feel to it, which I take to very well. It's scary to think of life as this BIG thing that keeps on changing--and yet some things remain as they are... I liked the parallelism in your verses. Makes everything connected to each other.I enjoyed reading this. The picture's lovely as well.
it goes round and round, each tick a moment to appreciate or let slip into the ether...nicely done. love the pic as well.