Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Mag 27



once sparkling and new-
the threads of our joints
moved and intertwined
freely....

joining one another
smoothly
without effort

creating a union
that was unique
to us alone

serving a purpose
that only we-
two parts joined as one-
could serve

but time and age
brought inevitable
deterioration

no longer able to
seperate without
one or both crumbling

a union once necessary
-now old
-no longer serving the grander purpose
possibly forgotten

except by us

for Magpie Tales

2 comments:

  1. Oh, this was achingly lovely. So much emotion and story in your carefully chosen words.

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  2. This is so subtle. The metaphor was unexpected but perfect. Well crafted. I found it moving esp the sentence -
    "no longer able to
    seperate without
    one or both crumbling"
    Well Done!

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