Thursday, August 26, 2010

mag 29




Breath held still against the wind
fearing a single breeze would
reveal the empty pane
that frames my hidden desire
to find
home

written for Magpie Tales

11 comments:

  1. breath held still against the wind -
    beautiful phrase, sometimes it feels that much of life is like that. Nice work!

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  2. Lovely words....many blessings..bkm

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  3. A lot of depth to these short lines...

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  4. You know it is said, we like to be lost, so w can find our way home. Thanks

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  5. I so adore both the content of this simple, short poem and the juxtaposition of Teresa of Avila's words immediately below. I can almost see her living in this place, finding a way to house her sisters there.

    THANK YOU for such beautiful mind meanderings.

    My Magpie this week.

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  6. the empty pane to find home...nicely played...wonderful magpie!

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  7. how did I miss this one?
    it is breathtaking
    in its feelings
    lovely poem

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