Dear Amy: Love the Creationist take on the prompt! I particularly like; "Toothless grin totoothless grimace"Never thought of it that way, but now that you mention it! Wow! Maybe heaven is for the toothless? (dentists and denturists may not feel that way! hahah!) Great poem and take on the prompt! Very original. Putting you on "fav"!
Perspective certainly does change ... I loved the rainbow after rain line ... very nice job!
Ah, very nice!
I got lost in the beauty of your words..A feeling that is like little butterflies sailing through the air and makes you smile.Joanny
Ah, yes, this circle of life.
Lucky fish have very short memories. each circuit of the bowl is new. Maybe life could be like that if one had the right attitude.
Extremely well done, Susan!
the great circle, still adored by the One that created it...i bet there is a grin there. smiles.nice magpie!
Good poem, Amy!
I like the endless,creative feeling of this poem..thanks!
Round and round, never tiring; we don't appreciate them as much as we should! Great imagery.
Love your depth of perception. Wonderful take on the prompt. I have really enjoyed reading about you and your take of life. Love your poetry. Wait until you turn 60! Now there's a number for you!
handsome thoughts,life is a circle indeed!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/04/magpie-tale-the-list-of-magpie-tale-participants/mine is up,thank you for reading it.BEST!