Sunday, May 23, 2010

Mag 15


lying on the shore
of humanity

lured by envy and desire

gasping for the
life-giving source

snared by artifice

wide-eyed with fear

released by mercy

loves passes
through

gliding once again
in the cool waters

of grace

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11 comments:

  1. I love the spiritual feel of your Magpie!

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  2. Very nice-
    This is what love is sometimes:
    Catch and Release.

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  3. Yes, it is true. Simply put no profounder words written for Magpie!

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  4. oh, this is lovely! i'm almost embarrassed that you seem to know me so well...your words gave my secret away, my daily struggle to reach for the One who sets this captive free! such a beautiful magpie and it's written so well...

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  5. your words touch common ground of all of us,
    a universal piece,
    talented writing and fun magpie!

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  6. Ditto to all of the above comments -- a truly beautiful poem,

    Joanny

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  7. The cool waters of grace. How beautiful is that?!!

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  8. smiles. beautiful, and that grace she found me...now i run smooth. nice magpie!

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  9. This flowed along with utmost truth.

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  10. a wonderful thoughtful poem
    grace...say no more

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